My sqdrn is doing a cpl promotion, and ive been allowed to put my name down. can people please give me any tips on my application letter? be harsh, i can take constructive criticism. also just some background, i was selected to put my name down bc my attendance uniform and drill are exceling apparently. I haven’t completed first class but 4 whatever reason staff are letting me be an acceptation. btw i didn’t ask myself, sgt suggested it to me, so im not just desperately trying to become a cpl.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you as I am greatly interested in becoming the next JNCO, and joining the XXXX NCO team. Though I have only been at cadets since July 2021 , my experience of air cadets has been amazing, and I am hoping that by achieving the rank of Corporal, I can give back to the Air Training Corps what it has given to to me. I also hope that by becoming a JNCO, I can learn more about the squadron and how it works, as well as get to know other cadets more, both in and out of my flight. I feel I have well developed leadership, teamworking and communication skills, gained both from inside and outside of the ATC.
As an example, I am currently a 1st Dan black belt and junior instructor at the XXXX Taekwondo club, which I have regularly attended for 3 hours a week over the past 8 years. I instruct all ages as well as all belts, and have helped many to achieve successful gradings and move up within the sport. I am also the captain of my school form, where I have to attend regular meetings to discuss and come up with solutions to problems people have brought up, as well as having to talk confidently in front of a classroom. These abilities to organise activities, lead a group of people and easily demonstrate and share my knowledge with others are easily transferable to cadets, and would particularly help within the role of a JNCO.
Even as a cadet, I try to lead by example, making sure my drill, uniform and attendance are the best they can possibly be, and partaking in off squadron events like inter-squadron athletics and cross country, as well as selling poppys in Sainsburys for the royal British legion. I attend all compulsory events, and take opportunities when they are given. I also like to help the other cadets where possible, whether that`s aiding them to adjust their uniform to the correct way or giving them advice online, for example sending a video to a cadet who was struggling with ironing their brassard. A few times I have taken the front of my flight due to other NCOs absence, and I have taught small groups of cadets drill when the NCOs have been preoccupied.
Currently, I am working towards my first class qualification, and am hoping to start my bronze Dofe this summer. My hope is that as my time at cadets increases, I will earn as many qualifications and badges as possible, and maybe even go on to become a cadet warrant officer. Though I have quite clearly not been at cadets as long as others, I feel my experience from outside of the ATC and the commitment I`ve already shown to cadets, as stated above, give me fulfilling skills in order to become a part of the NCO team.
As a Cpl, I will help the NCOs as much as possible to increase uniform standards, defeat lateness and improve drill, so we can be the shiniest squadron on parade. I take great pride in XXXX, and I, alongside the staff and the NCOs, hope to help make it it the best it can be in all aspects.
Cdt XXXX